WRITING EDITORIALS

 

Talk before the Cocolink Seminar-Workshop

United Coconut Planters Bank

Makati, Metro Manila

July 2, 1991

 

By Gerry Gil

Associate Editor

Manila Standard

 

 

     Thank you very much for inviting me to talk about writing editorials. I am extremely grateful because nobody ever asks me to talk on this topic. Nobody even allows me to talk about it.  When people ask me what I do and I tell them that I write editorials, they usually turn away to look for somebody more interesting. And some of them, before they turn away, ask: "Why aren't you a columnist?"

     Don't get me wrong. I'm not offended when people act as if columnists are far more important than editorial writers. It probably shouldn't be that way, but that's a fact of life in Manila newspapering.

     This lesson was driven home to me more than 30 years ago on the old Evening News. We had a history student, a cum laude candidate no less from the University of the Philippines, who worked as a deskman in the late evening to early morning.  This young man was overjoyed when the editor asked him to write an editorial.  As soon as the editorial was printed, he went out and had a calling card made, which identified him as an editorial writer of the Evening News.  But he stopped distributing the calling card when his editors pointed out that the calling card should have identified him as "editorial writer and night guard."

     Of course, things aren't this bad today.  Nonetheless, the importance of the editorial -- and the editorial writer -- in Manila newspapers remains somewhat problematical because there are several competing schools of thought as to what an editorial is and should be.

 

What the editorial is

     Nobody really disputes the position that the editorial sets forth the stance of the newspaper and its owners.  The importance of the editorial -- and the editorial -- therefore depends on the extent to which the owners of the newspaper believe they should take stances and press these positions on the reading public.

     Newspaper owners that believe that they have a message to disseminate forcefully will generally give a high priority to editorials and will ensure that those who write the editorials are persons with relatively high positions who are sensitive to every nuance of management thinking on most public issues.

     On the other hand, there are other newspaper owners who look on the editorial as something they must have because all other newspapers have it. Such owners are perfectly happy to have editorials that can be categorized as: "Oh, the shame of it!" and "Oh, the glory of it!" and "Oh!"  Such editorials are likely to be written by fairly junior people, whose prose bristles with such phrases as "We point to with pride" or "We view with alarm."

     But I am oversimplifying -- because all management are sensitive to at least a few public issues. Even on those questions on which they have no preferred answer, there are answers they don't like. There are also issues on which the owners don't have a stance but the higher ranking editors do -- and want the editorial to reflect their positions.

 

What the editorial writer is

     One would therefore imagine that editorial writers, like our history major on the Evening News of 30 years ago, are happy with their status. On the contrary, many editorial writers are not -- because all too often, they look on the task as an unwelcome imposition.

 

The editorial writer as ‘wordsmith’

     It is in this situation that the editorial writer is regarded and treated mainly as a wordsmith: a person who writes elegantly enough to package what his owners and editors want him to say -- regardless of whether he believes what he is writing.

     In this view, the editorial writer is a mercenary on permanent retainer -- something like an in-house lawyer whose major function is to find a rationalization for what his bosses want to do.  Unfortunately, the editorial writer seldom gets credit for justifying the positions of his bosses, who, in their seldom questioned wisdom, believe that their biases and pet prejudices are positions that are reasonable, logically valid, factually based and extremely moral.

     No wonder, then, that many editorial writers feel particularly frustrated whenever they are forced to justify positions that they themselves do not believe in.

 

The editorial writer as expert

     In many newspapers, there are a number of persons who write editorials -- and often, the writer chosen is the person with some expertise in the field.

     Thus, the business editor is tapped to write an editorial on the balance-of-payment figures, the movie editor is asked to do an obituary-type editorial on Lino Brocka, and perhaps, a reporter or deskman who happens to be a dropout from a department of sociology is dragooned into writing an editorial on the results of the most recent Social Weather Stations Survey.

     While there is something to be said for this system-of-assignment-by-expertise, it carries a certain disadvantage. The task of writing the editorial then becomes an "extra" assignment for the staff member, who, depending on his background and writing skill, may spend up to several hours writing the editorial.

     Unless the editorial writer is writing on a topic close to his heart and is advocating his own personal position, he is likely to view the task as an unwelcome imposition -- and the editorial will suffer accordingly.

     Some newspapers pay their staff members for this extra chore, but this creates another problem. Cash-strapped staff members, regardless of their expertise, will try to retain the money-making opportunities for themselves -- and this is bound to cause some dissension in the staff. Further, a person who writes an editorial "just for the money" is likely to expend the least possible effort necessary to get an acceptable (as against an excellent) job done.

 

The editorial writer as rationalizer

     Whether wordsmith or expert, the editorial writer often becomes a case-builder or rationalizer, especially where the topic of the editorial is decided on by a committee -- usually composed of editors and senior deskmen who feel they have better things to do.

     All too often, the committee comes up with a topic but enunciates points of view that are not altogether compatible.  The poor editorial writer often must go through a lot of intellectual contortions to come up with an editorial that is acceptable to all the committee members -- who, most of the time, would not be able to come up with such an editorial themselves.

 

The editorial writer as free agent

     It is not, however, every day that the editorial writer is told what he should write about. On many days, he is more or less free to write what he wants -- as long as it does not contradict the stances of the owners and editors (more liberal owners and editors are satisfied with a situation where they can "live with" the editorial).

     But even here, there are frustrations -- especially if the editorial-writer has other responsibilities. Many such persons who sit in an editorial committee meeting hesitate to propose any topics for fear that it will be assigned to them.

 

The editorial writer as ghost-writer

     No wonder, also, that the editorial writer is considered by many (and sometimes, even by himself) to be the moral inferior of the columnist, who, at least in theory, is writing out of his own convictions.

     The person who writes editorials tends to look at himself as performing the rather thankless job of a ghost-writer. And, like the ghost-writer, he feels frustrated when he writes what he doesn't quite believe in -- and even more frustrated when his best writings (especially those that represent the outpourings of his soul) do not carry his signature.

 

Writing the editorial

     From time to time, I have been asked by people who have been asked to write their first editorial how they should go about doing it. I give a very simple answer: "Imagine that you are writing a letter to the editor and keep it to about 65 lines."

     Most letters to the editor are commentaries on some event. They may praise or condemn the event, question the way it has been reported, or express agreement, disagreement or doubt with the way some commentator has evaluated it.

     And this description will suffice for many ordinary editorials -- particularly the type that "point to with pride," "view with alarm," or "condemn in no uncertain terms."

     But if I were to go deeper into the question, I would build my answer around the fact that the editorial sets forth a position.  The editorial need not, and perhaps, should not take a black-and-white position -- because if the issue were obviously black-and-white, there probably is no reason for writing an editorial because that would be belaboring the obvious. In fact, some issues are so complex and even ambiguous that they warrant the kind of response that I describe as "passionate neutrality."

 

The editorial expresses an attitude

     Since the editorial takes a position, it should be obvious that we are talking about a short essay that mixes values and facts in such a way as to rationally justify the position the editorial advocates.

     More often than not, the editorial is an extended syllogism in which the major premises (the universals) are statements about values and the minor premises (the specifics) are statements of fact.  When we have a syllogism in which the major premise is a statement of value and the minor premise is a statement of fact, the conclusion is the expression of an attitude.  And, by and large, this is what an editorial is: a statement of attitude toward some object -- usually a person, policy or event.

 

The editorial is selective

     Since the editorial combines statements of fact with statements of value, one of the major tasks of the editorial writer is to decide which values and facts are to enter into the editorial. Which values are salient? Which facts are relevant?

     There are several ways of approaching the selectivity issue.

     First, if we want to praise or condemn something or perhaps endorse a policy alternative, we must select one (or more) of the many social values as the basis for our praise or condemnation. In this case, the editorial picks on a fact and comments on it -- and selects at least one of many values as the basis of the commentary.

     Second, we may want to enunciate and elaborate on a value and use a recent event (fact) as the occasion (or "peg") for the commentary. Here, the value if "pre-chosen" and the editorial writer is merely looking for an event that will give him an excuse to discuss the value and its implications at greater length.

     Third, we may want to present a competing interpretation of a fact, that is, to dispute the explanation some other person has given to a set of events.  Here, we are in effect stating that a different conceptual scheme must be used for interpreting the event.  Here, the value component may be implicit -- we may be suggesting that the commentator we disagree with is either dumb or less than honest. Or it can be very explicit -- as in the case where we say that the commentator must be operating on a value framework that is grossly distorted.